Udhari var chya prema lar arthach kay?
A serenade on a midsummer night
I was not the singer nor the singee
But I was just the look out
To make sure no one else came.
A glance stolen but never returned.
A question asked but never answered.
A thousand conversations all in my head.
Borrowed love on borrowed time.
Teri pan he mana la kon sangnar?
Messages back and forth
All passed through me
I was the guy’s best friend
And the girl’s first cousin.
Ji kavita amcha sathi lihleli nahi
ter ma tyache point ach kay?
I was just a messenger
But you never noticed me
M’lady was happy and
That made me ecstatic.
But this I promise in
Another birth, another lifetime
I will move heaven and earth
To make you mine.
[This is a flight of fantasy. Extrapolations into real life will be summarily shot down or decapitated whichever is more painful. To people who have been pained by reading this - too bad, take some aspirin.
To give credit/discredit where it is due - the first line was made up by Nikhil in a correspondence and the idea of mixing up two languages was Raamesh's. ]
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Ji kavita amcha sathi lihleli nahi
ter ma tyache point ach kay?
jithe prem udhar miLata, tithe kavitechi kaay tamaa :D
a good one...idea by raamesh seems working :P
Wow. Loved it. Can you please give the translation as well?
yeah marathi->english translation pliss.
else i cant understnd:(
actually now i can...its very nice.
@nikhil
it is your idea too so you can take some credit.
@ TNT
translation? actually it is pretty bad marathi. but will try.
first line: what is the point of borrowed love?
second line: who will explain this to my heart?
third line: If a poem is not written for me then what is its purpose?
thank you!
@VW
how come this sudden understanding? :o
someone you met? ;)
:D translation much appreciated!!
and thereafter: nice!
Another one bites the dust.
Another distraught heart.
How many more will hurt
until we learn that-
that which meets, must part!
@kray
thank you!
@id it is
will remember that the next time I write something. cool!
@vijay
run out of ideas. again! :(
ardha magadhi aaikla hota...paan he tar...
@pushkar
ardha magadhi??? he amhala samzla nahi...
thoda marathi baaki english...
manglish...
hehehehe.... M terrible at jokes...
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