Saturday, December 31, 2005

Haiku

Deadline slips by, silence
Boss realizes -
Ten screeching crows.

8 comments:

anu said...

What a lovely poem.

Those ten screeching crows say so much..phew!

I LOVED THIS POEM :)

kray said...

=))!!! Apt :)

samudrika said...

@Anu

Thank you for dropping by. My prayers are with you. Keep smiling!

Supremus said...

LOL.

Wonderful! I can never write Haiku. Ever.

Suyog

samudrika said...

Haikus are like the distillate of an emotion. Just write what you feel!

Voice Within said...

Free ka Gyaan: A 5-7-5 syllable structure and a reference to some season/related thing is apparently a requirement for a Haiku in Japanese. However for foriegn languages like english the rules are sometimes not obeyed.

Dumaketu said...

Scrumptuous!

samudrika said...

@dumaketu
I thank ye.